Zion

*gasp* *faints*

I didnt read (most) of the crits mentioned above so my own crit may sound a little inferior compared to the other's :P but anyway... I liked the pacing of ...

This is a completly diffrent and new setting from the usual stuff I used to write in fantasy fiction. Suggestions for character names and ttile suggestions are welcome. Prologue "Would ...

Anyone of you guys read any of his books? King Rat, Iron Council, etc.? Supposedly, he is the creator of New Weird. A...sort of fiction it seems...that incorporates elements from ...

OMG! Shes soooo cute! :D And aisan too! :D

FINALLY! :D

*storms in* YOU! *points* DANCE! *"totally random mode" on*

white + red + black combo. *nods* that would be awesome.

Correction. The sun melted the WAX. Not the feathers. lol! How can you melt feathers? hahahahahaha good one :D

I would dream...I would dream the worlds i have created. I would dream that I sail amongst the stars. Last night, I was in some sort of a vessel, that ...

But I dont wanna go to the trainstation. its 1 am in the morning damnit! ....no, im not scared, im just too lazy to do it."

"Yeah, I'll be done in an hour."

Also, I haven't heard of any radical Christian groups that are violent. Would you mind telling me of some, Gal (or anyone?)? Knock yourself out My personal favorite The group ...

(I havent read all of the posts mentioned above, but theres a lot of "God" going on) First of all, I approve of same sex marrige. Go Canada. Second, will ...

Yeah. But, theres is a diffrence between this story and the one before. I might be wrong though, but I THINK that a bit more background will do the story ...