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Interesting. okay knitpicks: Spelling!..For instance, there were a few words that were misspelled. Example of one...you wrote "there" several times, when it should have been "their". This needs better

Hey there. Welcome to YWS ^.^ I really liked this...it's pretty haunting. I would review this, but I see you're not interested in critique ^.^ Which, I'll just say...when someone ...

Imteresting! Only knitpicks I have is something you'll need to check over. There are several places where you either spaced between a " and the word after it, or didn't ...

Very interesting. Kept my interest the whole way through...the only knit pick I have, is a couple words that should've been different...which at the beginning you wrote, "This is an ...

This definitely has potential...I can really see this as being something that is heart wrenching, and then turned into a beautiful work of art. As was said before, there definitely ...

Wow. This was amazing!..absolutely beautiful! You have a talent for writing...and the descriptions were so lovely. I could picture it all in my mind...I would definitely love to read more ...