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Chapters 2 & 3 are already out!

In my opinion i say keep it how it is. I really like the story! The "angel" theme is perfect.

Ohhh, i figured it was something like that but didn't know for sure. -Ally :)

Haha, that's okay!

Bels POV was in third person, or that's how I was putting it as. Hmm. I guess it didn't seem like it enough. Thank you for the review, it will ...

It was kind of mean. But it didn't bother.. being a writer I knew i would get bad reviews.. Oh well.

It may recycled to you. But it get interesting going into the book. You (the reader) sees more about who and what each character is. Especially Chad and Bryan. They ...

also, as you read with Mrs. Cindy... she knows Bel before the meeting at the school yet Bel doesn't know her.... o.o i don't want to give anything away but ...

Bryan is the head masters son. Mrs. Cindy. NO ONE knows it.. So he sees himself as the "welcoming committee". I can see where you say its a little odd. ...

I LOVE IT!!!!! Honestly, i've been reading all of these. I really like where it's going. The idea you have for the novel. You see many "angel" books, but most ...

I LOVE IT! You can picture in your mind everything that happens... amazing work! The battle she is having in her head. Great idea.