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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Haiku (old and new)

    That was accidental, thank you for pointing it out though.

    Jul 16, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: haiku

    Your haiku is very beautiful, although I find it easier to see an image not in past tense, and maybe you could articulate it a bit more, but it conveyed ...

    Jan 26, 2010


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