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  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: The Listener

    A really captivating piece of work. I noticed that you tend to use a single word too many times. And the following line made little sense : 'Introverted they call ...

    Jun 8, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: inhabit me

    Hi. I really liked your work but I think it would look better with punctuations. The words you use, weaves the poem into a series of complex emotions that might ...

    Jun 8, 2012
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Through the End

    it's a beautiful poem. But it would sound better with punctuations. Keep writing! -A

    Jun 7, 2012


here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings