adelekm

Thank you so much! This is a current experience, but I do have flashbacks coming up . . . Do you have any suggestions for how to distinguish between the ...

I agree, the description is awkward and I'll definitely fix that part about the sky. Thank you so much!!

Thank you, and I will definitely take your advice into consideration :)

Hahaha . . . I guess it's clear I was most recently writing about the beach :P

Hey! This poem is beautifully written! I love the images it creates, and the final stanza ties the whole piece together very well. I also enjoyed how the tone changes ...

Hey! Good job with this poem! It is well-written and leaves me both satisfied and wanting to know more (though I suppose that is the trademark of a good poem). ...

Hey! I really enjoyed reading your story! The descriptions gave me a good picture of not only what was going on but also what it looked like as it was ...