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I know truly deep, that I love you to death. And you love me back, so much, I don't even know how much myself. i didn't like this stanza. the ...

this was really super amazing. like really. the writing was spectacular. haha. i'm a little bit blown away. i only found one thing that bothered me: Those days where he ...

It's a bit confusing having a huge block of dialouge between two people. The general rule is that you have a new line for each character that speaks. Like: “Do ...

this was absolutely beautiful. i loved the language, and the reoccurring green. i really liked this. especially when you didn't say their name. both the narrator of the person they ...

i really love satin's personality. all the little things you add in, such as how the tag is cut off of her shirt, is really nice. it just gives us ...