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Crescent View High school was the most segregated school on the planet-- racially and socially. I didn’t understand why some people would separate themselves from others who were different from ...

Hello kilroyCHIC89! Overall, I think you're a good writer, but this story need some work. I loved the theme(I'm a sucker for a good teen drama story!) and the way ...

I'll definitely add more. I'm getting some ideas now! =] If anyone else has any ideas, help me out!

Here are some more! I thought this next one was a little freaky of him and I, in my younger years.

Actually, when he was a baby, his eyes were green! Now they are some yellowish gold color.

Well, I'm glad you all like them!

Not sure where this is going...Crits would be lovely. =] “We’re not making any progress,” Judge Matheson’s eyes expressed annoyance at my gum-chewing, snapping, and popping. He pushed his glas

Wow! They're almost twins, that is weird !

It's my camera, I can't afford the super expensive ones. Lol, and my cat's name is Riley.

Here's some pictures of my cat, my camera's not that good but I'm working with what I've been given! He's quite a character!

This was a great piece of work! Usually when I see something that long, I tend to run and hide, but I just kept reading! Just add some more details, ...

Ha, wow sounds just like my high school :D Anyways, great story! I'd love if you added more detail so we get a better idea to who the characters really ...

Your pictures are phenomenal! My favorite is the seascape that one is gorgeous. =]

Oh wow, I do remember! I was about eight, and my first story was about crime fighting accordion players. Boy, was I creative :D

This story was pretty good. I wouldn't read it again, but has anyone else read it? I need some reviews and thoughts about the main idea. ( :