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Alright, as I go through this I am just going to write down my thoughts. "Epoh had become lazy" Why has he become lazy? "You've been gone a few months", ...

Great piece. You have a way with imagery that allows you to sustain the very morose mood and tone. I didn't like the "gray, gray, gray, gray" part because I ...

Thanks for the advice! I'm glad you liked it!

Gravity’s Pull Alone, she pushed herself up the escalating path through the colony of birch. As she would pass each tree she swore that she saw eyes gazing back at ...

This story reminds me of Cormac McCarthy's "The Road," but infused with the narration of a teenage girl, which is a really interesting idea. The setting and general atmosphere of ...

Gravity’s Pull Alone, she pushed herself up the escalating path through the colony of birch. As she would pass each tree she swore that she saw eyes gazing back at ...