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@NerdBurga thanks for the suggestions, they really helped! :D

Thanks! @MissRockers, the rhyming scheme was deliberately made that way, so as to convey that life isn't always even . Things happen, and life changes. :)

i really liked the end. "i'll learn it as i go" . i can totally relate. :)

Ah, thanks! And yeah, it seems i did miss punctuation class. :)

Thanks, there! :)

Thank you! :)

The flow is a bit off, other than that though, it's great.

Thanks! :)

suggestions, to be precise? :)

Thanks so much, it was all rather helpful . :) oh and he isn't form England! He was merely schooled in England. :)