aisu_ookami

That's....wow. It's really good. I positivly love it! Wahoo! i would see light and not this endless ring of night. Little rhyming thrown in there....nice! i am not the blatent ...

Nifty........ I usually don't read vampire stories but the title made me curious :D Anyway I really like it! I felt as if I was inside the vampire's head or ...

Great poem! The only thing I would think about changing are two of the stanzas at the end: I step upon the path Between the trees, oh so tall, And ...

I like it! It caught me off guard...very interesting story! It's not a 'normal' poetry piece (it's not about death or nature or something like that) which is one of ...