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aisu_ookami

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Blue

    I like carries with it the image of possibility, which fits well with a poem about a newborn. But those are just my thoughts :)

    Dec 10, 2004
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: warning may offend- Brotherly Love

    I love how you repeat the line about the bow in her hair. That really tied it all together and the last line was really what hit me the most. ...

    Dec 2, 2004


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— George Eliot