alicat159

I really enjoyed reading this piece. I LOVE Warriors and I had to find a piece on the books. The beginning was AWESOME! The one thing I wanted to point ...

Ummm... thanks for the review but this story isn't complete and it's my first one. It's obvious that you are so far building Suzanna as a strong character, but none ...

Thanks, I hadn't noticed that. I just added more to it today, so thanks for reviewing it. I'll fix those right now.

Great Job! It was nicely written and very pleasant to read. I loved the way you wrote it and I'll be looking at more of your works.

(deleted) I couldn't remember where I wanted to go with this...

I really like it! I can't wait to read the rest of it!

I thought it was good. Considering the plot of a mother killing her child, it was described kinda...gently. I remember you telling me that the mother killed herself, but in ...