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Re: I have Four Scars
I love this poem. It's absolutley amazing. The first and second scars confuse me though. As someone else pointed out, they should be despcribed more, like the last two. The ...
May 31, 2009 -
Re: Those Little Glass Slippers (1)
This is an incredible, amazing piece of work. I love that you wrote it from someone other than the stepsisters', step-mother's points of view. The wording and imagery of the ...
May 31, 2009 -
Re: The Story of Morgan Thatcher
Carebear! I loved it, yet it made absolutely no sense to me. But if Haley said it turned out way better, I believe her. You should definitely post some more ...
May 30, 2009 -
Re: Sleeves.
My twin writes beautifully. I love this poem. Although: Darling, why must you cry? They all warned that he didn't love you, in your heart you knew it was all ...
May 30, 2009 -
Re: don't you forget about me. (chapter 1)
Introduction Ebony- Her eyes were the most beautiful green I’ve ever seen. Her hair was the softest I’ve ever felt. She came down south when we were seventeen. “From Indiana.” ...
May 28, 2009 -
Re: don't you forget about me. (chapter 1)
Introduction Ebony- Her eyes were the most beautiful green I’ve ever seen. Her hair was the softest I’ve ever felt. She came down south when we were seventeen. “From Indiana.” ...
May 28, 2009
