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almurs13

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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Poetry

    I love love love this so much.. You describe poetry beautifully in a very simple way. I really like the metaphors.

    Nov 2, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Station.

    WOW, THANK YOU! It really means a lot that you enjoyed my work so much :) %u2665 That's exactly what I'm hoping to accomplish, readers feeling the emotions. Thank you!

    Nov 19, 2014
  • Other » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Under water.

    Thank you! :) It was really hard to leave everything behind, but now I've realize I'll always have the great memories. I hope it's the same for you :) Good ...

    Nov 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: they sink

    WOW! Such a beautiful piece!

    Nov 19, 2014
  • Other » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Ending

    I just noticed jazzydracula had already pointed out the mistake. So sorry for being redundant.

    Nov 19, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Station.

    THANK YOU! It really means a lot %u2665

    Nov 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Station.

    Thank you so much for taking the time! It's great that you can identify. I find that when I read it, the grammatical errors slip and I don't see them, ...

    Oct 22, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Station.

    THANK YOU :) It means a lot that you think it's good. I'll keep those pointers in mind and keep using that technique. Thanks again!

    Oct 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Dear Forgotten

    I feel just the same way, so I love what this poem expresses. It's greatly written, with simplicity and easy to understand. I love it! I love the figurative language ...

    Oct 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Quest

    Beautifully written and expresses so much emotion. I love the use of complex vocabulary intertwined with simple sentences. You have a lot of talent (Lucky!). I absolutely LOVE this verse: ...

    Oct 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: deleted

    It's absolutely beautiful. I love the way the figurative language is used, especially "it took both the leaves and her sanity." I feel what you're trying to express. It's perfect.

    Oct 10, 2014
  • Other » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Under water.

    THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! It feels amazing to have someone think that my writing is good :') I'll try to expand the character futher and to put tell ...

    Oct 10, 2014
  • Other » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Under water.

    THANK YOU SO MUCH! It really means so much! That's what I want to accomplish, to grab the reader and to keep the interest and I'm glad you liked it! ...

    Oct 10, 2014


I took a deep breath and listened to the old brag of my heart; I am, I am, I am.
— Sylvia Plath