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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Demon Boy

    I have a few comments: Cassandra, her twin brother Red and her very best friend Stacey where walking home from a program at church when they all saw a very ...

    Mar 18, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Beginning

    I like your story, but I have a few suggestions: The first paragraph is one gigantic sentence. If you broke it up into two sentences it would be easier for ...

    Mar 24, 2010


The day, which was one of the first of spring, cheered even me by the loveliness of its sunshine and the balminess of the air. I felt emotions of gentleness and pleasure, that had long appeared dead, revive within me. Half surprised by the novelty of these sensations, I allowed myself to be borne away by them, and forgetting my solitude and deformity, dared to be happy.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein