amandajo

This is my second poem and I just wanted to know what you guys thought of it and how i can make it better. There are two sides of me ...

thanks that did help a little i can see what you mean. i didnt actually specify. i was trying to say that there are so many things to be controlled ...

i liked it. i'm actually writing a story like it. i'm not going to bore you with the details but your story was entertaining. hope you keep on writing. -amanda

I control My future My life My past My present Myself.... Then why does It feel like Someone else Is running it, running me? I can see That I may ...

i liked it but i'm new so i guess it doesnt really count :) -amanda