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Re: Broken
Thank you!(: I will take that into consideration. I want to revise it!(: thanks so much
Feb 16, 2014 -
Re: Lady Emerald
Very good. it was powerful! It kept me interested! I really liked the title of the Poem. Very Very clever!(: what made you write this? personal experience? An idea? A ...
Feb 13, 2014 -
Re: Broken
Ahhh okay. Thank you. I'll see what I can do. (:
Feb 6, 2014 -
Re: Nobody Sees
Very! Good (: just really long
Feb 6, 2014 -
Re: Promises
Ahh clever! Good job sunshine (:
Feb 6, 2014 -
Re: Broken
Thank you s.s. Umm call me amberly. Or berry haha. What do you mean about language?
Feb 5, 2014 -
Re: ​More than love
very good!!
Feb 5, 2014 -
Re: Rusted Hearts
Ahhh very good!!!(: talented
Feb 5, 2014 -
Re: I Heard About A Place
OHHHHH my!! loved it(: incredible(: kept me intrigued(: I like the line " I heard about a place, a wonderful place." clever !!!!!(: overall, Well done kido(: -Amber
Feb 5, 2014 -
Re: Don't Day Dream
Very good! definitely so true!(:
Feb 5, 2014 -
Re: Out of Water Experience
Clever piece! enjoyed your work!! continue with more!!(: fantastic job(:
Feb 5, 2014 -
Re: Stress Test
Ahhh! quite magnificent. I really enjoyed it(: well done young writer!( -Amber
Feb 5, 2014 -
Re: Strong and Weak
hmm. Me gusta! ( I like it) haha. Interesting. It is small ,but refelctive and yet clever. Enjoyed your work young writer! -Amber
Feb 5, 2014 -
Re: Coming From a Stranger
Interesting piece. I enjoyed it greatly. Well done!(:
Feb 5, 2014 -
Re: Nobody
MMMMhhm. Very very good! I liked it very much. A tab bit confusing at times. Well done!(: lovely piece of work
Feb 5, 2014