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Re: "Staring Contest"
A fairly new piece of writing. Again, about a woman. Maybe I should just stop denying it and just to the world admit that I'm somewhat of a raging homosexual. ...
Nov 18, 2011 -
Re: "Maria, Maria"
About a year old. I suppose this was some kind of way for my brain to connect me with my inner lesbian-ness, or something. Either way, I hope you enjoy ...
Nov 18, 2011 -
Re: The Confusing Love Poem
thanks for the input. this poem is so old and i was just freestyling. not exactly well thought out i was just typing things that came to mind.
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: The Confusing Love Poem
Hey everyone on YWS...ummm i've been gone for quite a while trying to find myself and where i stand in this big blue spherical thing we call i just posted ...
Sep 21, 2009 -
Re: Trees
hey.! texas huh.? i LOOOOVE texas :) ok now for my thought on your poem... i know everyone has been saying this but it does seem a little unfinished. i ...
Sep 21, 2009 -
Re: sadness (completely rewritten)
i'll tell you this..i cried. there are very few poems that make me cry like i cried for this one. i honestly just felt the emotion coming from this it ...
Sep 21, 2009 -
Re: Note to Self
Note to Self: Stop reaching for things impossible to grasp. Stop holding this stuff you’re unable to clasp. Stop climbing the ladder awaiting your fall. Stop looking for “Prince Charming”, ...
Apr 1, 2009 -
Re: The Name's Tori, Pleased To Meet Ya
I STARTED READING WHEN I WAS TWO TOO!!! AND I REALIZED I WANTED TO WRITE WHEN I WAS ABOUT 7 OR 8!!! omg tori...we're twins!! hehe :)
Apr 1, 2009 -
Re: Whatever Happened to Love?
oh wow. i REALLY liked this a lot!!! what drew me in was when u mentioned mary j and swv (haha inside i was like ooh i love them!!) but ...
Feb 25, 2009 -
Re: The Good Die Young
Cheer up little one, don't be too sad. Instead of your fate, think of the life you once had. I'm sorry for the abrupt, unexpected ending. I know how hard ...
Feb 25, 2009 -
Re: An Ode to Google
i never knew one could like google this much!! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D ...
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: His Smile
dont worry im not gonna b mean :) i think the whole point of this site is not to cruely critizize but to help one another since we all share ...
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: My Skin
same here about the 5th stanza. i would put some input but i havent the slightist idea on what you are trying to interpret!!! ok heres my unerstanding: To it, ...
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: Said to be a Father's Love
beautiful poem. its on such a tragic topic and it really reflects it in your words. i know u dont want sympathy but i really have to say im sorry ...
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: If Life Gave You...
Interesting poem. I really like all the questions you asked in it. At the end it had a sort of weird flow but I'm new, so what do I know? ...
Jan 26, 2009
