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Re: Trees
hey.! texas huh.? i LOOOOVE texas :) ok now for my thought on your poem... i know everyone has been saying this but it does seem a little unfinished. i ...
Sep 21, 2009 -
Re: sadness (completely rewritten)
i'll tell you this..i cried. there are very few poems that make me cry like i cried for this one. i honestly just felt the emotion coming from this it ...
Sep 21, 2009 -
Re: Whatever Happened to Love?
oh wow. i REALLY liked this a lot!!! what drew me in was when u mentioned mary j and swv (haha inside i was like ooh i love them!!) but ...
Feb 25, 2009 -
Re: An Ode to Google
i never knew one could like google this much!! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D ...
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: His Smile
dont worry im not gonna b mean :) i think the whole point of this site is not to cruely critizize but to help one another since we all share ...
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: My Skin
same here about the 5th stanza. i would put some input but i havent the slightist idea on what you are trying to interpret!!! ok heres my unerstanding: To it, ...
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: Said to be a Father's Love
beautiful poem. its on such a tragic topic and it really reflects it in your words. i know u dont want sympathy but i really have to say im sorry ...
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: If Life Gave You...
Interesting poem. I really like all the questions you asked in it. At the end it had a sort of weird flow but I'm new, so what do I know? ...
Jan 26, 2009 -
Re: Dear Daddy,
Since I'm new, i have to write at least two reviews on a peice of writing before submitting anymore of my own. I chose this one. I'm so glad i ...
Jan 25, 2009