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Re: An Eternity of Shadows: A Vampire's Requiem
This story doesn't read in a way that makes me want to take it seriously, but depending on what you were going for, that might not be a bad thing. ...
Dec 5, 2008 -
Re: Introduction to "Eternity"
This is your first story? Well, this is my first writing critique. I hope that I'm able to help you. I did not notice any mistakes in the grammar, but ...
Nov 2, 2008