andreaj811

I like how you didn't end each line like the end of a sentence. Like you put "morphs into" as a line and then moved onto a new sentence, then ...

I absolutely love this You obviously used a ton of poetic devices like imagery, personification, simile, etc. and I think that's great. I loved your detail in the imagery you ...

wow i really like this maybe it is because i'm all about not letting a guy walk all over you? haha l I think you were really descriptive and i ...

excellent I really like this I like how you just jumped right into it and I think repeating things like "come back" really add emphasis. I really felt like you ...

really nice job! i think with a few more revisions this poem could be really great. I like your use of alliteration with "repetition of regret runs..." and you used ...

Even though there were very few words, I felt I could picture what you were talking about. However, I still felt it was a little choppy in some places. You ...