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Ok, I thought this chapter was better. But some things you could've explained a little more cause I was a little confused who the character was and what was happening. ...

I thought it was pretty good. But I found that she let him get away with it too easily. Personally if I was her, I would slap him and probably ...

I thought that story was interesting. I found that it didn't explain a lot of things. I'm not quite sure what happened and it kind of just ended so it ...

Hi! I liked it but it seemed a little short and you didn't put a lot of description. Also when you explained some things I got a little confused like ...

I loved it!! It was soo good and the way you described the feelings and everyone I loved. That's the way that I could express my feelings in writing. I ...

Hi me again! I thought the same way. I found that it was going WAY to fast. I was really confused and wasn't sure what was happening. But I did ...

Hi! I really liked your story. I found it interesting to read and I didn't find any mistakes. But I do kind of find that it is a little predictable ...

That was a cute story. I always love those kind of romances where two people have known each other since they were little and fall in love once they get ...

Hi Dark Eyed Pixie! I enjoyed reading that. But I did find that there was grammar problems with the periods. And I found it a little odd that she was ...