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  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Twilight Fan Fiction

    I liked this one. Really, I do. Well done, you've really captured the characters. One tiny, tiny problem. "His sweet breath tickled on my skin." I could, possibly be wrong, ...

    Oct 22, 2008
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Renesme

    It's an interesting idea, but I agree with Kepe, it does need to be a lot longer. I'm not really seeing any new ideas. You have a great writing style, ...

    Oct 22, 2008


For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.
— Audrey Hepburn