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  • Poetry » General, General Re: dead weight (and all that i'm almost ready to let go of)

    wow. i'm honestly speechless! i've read this more than 2 times and i can't lie, it is really good. its emotional and sits heavy on the readers' hearts, while having ...

    Dec 14, 2022
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Guardian Time

    hi! thank you for sharing this writing! i like the subject and prompt you have going with this, its interesting. you have a skill with describing things! i felt like ...

    Dec 13, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: This Is My Mood (Colors)

    intelligent writing! i always say that i wish i was a colorful person and colorful writer. i claim to be blue, with my writing a reflection of that. i like ...

    Dec 13, 2022
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Hugo, Little Steps

    this is tooo cute!! i feel like this is something diverse, lots of different ages of readers can like this piece. i love when writers can capture genuine adoration for ...

    Dec 9, 2022
  • Short Story » Lyrical, General Re: The Day I Chose Daddy

    this is such a sweet piece! i'm a daddy's girl and as well so this hit home. the bond between a dad and their daughter is wholesome and almost poetic ...

    Dec 9, 2022
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: brother, when?

    thank you for sharing this, its such an intimate moment. i listened to the soundcloud version and aghhh, it hit hard. your voice has such a calming, warm tone. it ...

    Dec 9, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: True Angel #4: Corp. Cleo Carson's Journal, Entry 1

    i know this is an older one, but it caught my eye! im now reading all the other ones. i like how this is a journal entry, it reminds me ...

    Dec 8, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Sweet Nothing - Chapter 2

    like @harryhardy said, this was a great continuation! to be honest, i wasn't expecting Paxton to be a people-person, so that threw me around! i guess i had stereotyped him ...

    Dec 8, 2022
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Eternity and a Day

    I always appreciate a longer writing like this, so thank you! First things first, you use such descriptive language! "gleaming"..."jutting"..."bleary." great choices! the story line is intriguing and

    Dec 8, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Romantic Re: Sweet Nothing - Chapter 1

    oooo this one is interesting!! first off.. i LOVE the reference to 505 lol, i assume arctic monkeys? when i first started reading this, my first thought was actually 2013 ...

    Dec 8, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Words

    well done on this one! my favorite line has to be "A sea of dark, a sea of light. A sea of flight, a sea of fight." the topic is ...

    Dec 8, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: maybe i won't hide forever

    i love this. i wish i had fancy things to say like the others, but gawd damn. i love the words u used and how u placed them, it seems ...

    Dec 7, 2022
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: I Am Very Enthusiastic

    wow. this hit hard. emotional pieces like this tend to pull on my heart strings. u really captured the essence of human nature and how the circle of life is ...

    Dec 7, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Loneliness

    hi! i heavily relate to this writing. u did very well!! loneliness off the bat for me is a very confusing emotion. i so deeply crave intimacy and closeness within ...

    Dec 7, 2022
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Home

    howdy! this is well written, i love the subject. its obvious and blatant, yet gives the reader room to wonder and think on their own or maybe relate. it gives ...

    Dec 7, 2022


I want to see people turn and writhe; make them feel things they cannot see and sometimes do not know.
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