annabanana

I am sorry you didn't feel my poem. there is no right way to write poetry, that's the beauty in it.

I am only interested in posting it as is. I like other people to perceive it how they will....

also, I wanted my poem to be written out in that structure but the stupid thing wouldn't let me lol.

I understand, I am currently learning better punctuation and such so i'm on my way there! Also, yes I have used poetry as an outlet for a great portion of ...

Great poem!!!! :)

Wow, thank you so much!!! :) Truly, it means a lot.

Great poem! I often find myself asking the same questions, what is love? and Who is to determine it? thanks for sharing!

Amazing!

excellent poem! I can vision what you are describing perfectly.. better yet I can feel the emotion flowing! In my oppinion you shouldn't change a thing ^_^ good job and ...

Great poem, i really liked it, keep up the good writing!!!!

Sorry, i can't really help with the ending, but your poem was really good! I very much enjoyed it. -AnnaBanana

I like how i can visualize images in my head, very detailed and well writen, And it was well organized in my oppinion. so good job! -Banana

Short, i love it, you found this???? I can't find hardly anything wrong with it, but that's jut me. cool poem! -AnnaBanana

Who are you writing about? You must realy like her alot, Cute, i like the writing style you used! AnnaBanana