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You should TELL me when you post your stuff! :evil: Seriously, though, that was so great. Savana of the Spoons! Awesomeness. How do you come up with this stuff? I ...

This has rhythm and rhyme but it avoids being too forced or sing-songy, which is really nice and also hard to do. So nice job. Also the title is intriguing. ...

I liked this. It seemed sweet and kind of simple, but in a good way. Comparing someone you love to a poem (Is that right? Sorry if I'm getting the ...

Oh god, that is so sad. But beautiful. “Three months, maximum”— one day, one week, one month, two. April showers pounded down intravenous rain clouds. I loved that stanza. "intravenous ...

Ooh. I like. I love the rhythym and tone of this... It sounds almost like whispering, kind of secret and seductive. If that makes any sense. I’ve got a million ...

I loved the stanza that repeats, especially Paper folds in unison, but my hands don't bend that way. Those lines are awesome. The fourth stanza was my least favorite, I ...

Wow. I'm not going to pretend like I understand it, but that's just really beautiful. Bare your feet with imperfections For holy are the sinful humble Cast your pearls among ...

It's kind of cool how it's all run together and doesn't really seem like a poem. I thought to myself, Why do you care? and answered, "I'm a giraffe." I ...

Spellcheck!!!! Sorry. Actually I really like the poem, but there's so many spelling mistakes that it's pretty hard to read. Anyway: It's me against the world If i must pick ...

I liked this, it's sweet. It doesn't seem too long to me. The last stanzas were especially cool, talking about how much smaller everything is, and the ending with your ...

Ooh, I like this. Like Nymph said, the expectancy that comes with seashells is incorporated coolly. every shell can hear the sound of the sea. even the smallest, the weakest, ...

I loved this. I think the way you spaced the lines worked really well. I have a few suggestions, but really they are very, very small. There is an orange ...

I don't think it's dull, exactly. Her sadness echoed ... I like that. And took out her mother's needle The needle's a cool image. Like a sword, only sewing is ...

I like the first line. And... I think I like the rest. I mean, it's really interesting. But it's also kind of hard to tell what your talking about. There's ...

yah... I love this... I love all your stories. Misspellings included :). Lillian seems like a really cool character. And the plot is exciting. You are brilliant. :D