antigone

Cool. I'm not sure if I like how every stanza starts with 'I', but maybe that's the point. You have some really beautiful imagery. A few typos: "sainity" should be ...

Jeez. No no no, it doesn't suck at all. It's maybe a little obscure, but it could be I'm just too obtuse to get it. the emo kid doesn't tell ...

Hey- that is TOTALLY AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!! It ROX MY SOX!!! It's short and sweet and your words and descriptions are so beautiful. It's amazing that you're only 13 and you can ...

Very cool. I really liked how you put translations; it helps alot for us ignorant people :). And the poem overall was very good, I loved your images and the ...

Whoa that is amazing. Very very very very good. :D :D But I can't find any of the other parts so I'm confused. Somebody help me!!!!

Wow, this is really great. Please post more! The only thing I noticed was sometimes the dialouge was a little confusing (hard to tell who's talking.) But overall it's brilliant! ...

This is good. You might want to try a version on the same idea but without the rhymes; it seems like maybe you could say more if you didn't feel ...