antigone

I don't know if I understand it exactly but I love this. Amazing images. Yeah, just beautiful. Kudos.

I liked it. Like the butterfly girl said, I love the way you started it. plus, it's exactly how I feel alot of the time. Freakily so. *Shrugs*. Nice job.

I like it, everything except And the rainbows from your lips fill me with life , which makes me think of those plastic pony things with technicolor manes. Other than ...

Wow, I like it. Usually short poems aren't that good. Correction, MY short poems are not good. Anyway, yours is awesome. I love the last line. Maybe add some punctuation? ...

LOL! Clever. I like it.

Beautiful images and personally I liked the london bridge reference. Great job.

I liked this. The rhyming is really well done and not distracting, and it has a kind of quietness I really like. Or something. The last two lines are nicely ...

I have nothing new to add, but this is swell! I love the rhythm, and how 'laughter' and 'distracter" almost rhyme in the first line. Also The mirror is a ...

I like it too. Alot. It's really sad and really well done. I don't think it necesarily needs more punctuation but that's just me. I guess I don't have anything ...

Wow, thanks everybody! Chevy : "the six-o-clock soaps will dull her pain" was supposed to be about the mom being sad because her little kid ran away. Once again, thank ...

I loved that. As for images... It's night, and there's a highway with lots of lonely blue lights. I don't know. I love the first line. And the whole poem ...

Wow, grim. I like it though. Cool images.

I like how it sort-of-almost rhymes but not quite. And the rose... in a dark room... that's a cool image. Nice.

Wow. That was beautiful. Sometimes poems like this seem too sickly-sweet but this didn't. At all. It sounds... old fashioned or something. I loved it though. It would be better ...

Yeah, it is very good. The rhyming is very well done. Great imagery too, and i loved the 'ding dong ding dong surprise' line. Also the title was really intriuging ...