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Re: The Nameless
No! Don't kill it! Please write more, it's really really good. And don't change to third person either. It's great the way it is.
May 19, 2005 -
Re: The Blade
I liked it, especially the last three lines. I don't think it's flippant at all.
May 16, 2005 -
Re: The Haves & The Have-Nots
Huh? But very interesting. I like it. :)
May 15, 2005 -
Re: surreality (a short story) (Over 13) /P
This is a waste of time cause I just realized the last post was more than a month ago but anyway, I really liked the story. Good job.
May 15, 2005 -
Re: A Moth Fluttered In
Thank's for the comments. I tried to change the title but as you see, it's not much better. Sigh... Thanks though!
May 12, 2005 -
Re: A Chance Encounter
Great job- That's exactly how I felt about this one guy. So yeah... Really nice.
May 12, 2005 -
Re: normal is that way
That's beautiful. I really liked it.
May 8, 2005 -
Re: Oscillation
Wow. That's really cool. I love the way you use the words, but I don't think I quite get it. What does it mean?
May 8, 2005 -
Re: Missing You
I liked it. I think the rhymes add a lot.
May 4, 2005