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  • Poetry » Horror, Realistic Re: Pregnant Satan

    Wow this is...something. I'll be honest I was timid to press on this piece, but I am glad I did. What I liked: 1. The flow. I don't know exactly ...

    Jun 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: S.O.S

    Hey there! What an intresting piece. I can't wait to review. What I liked: 1. The diction. The words you choose make a poem, and in this case it make ...

    Jun 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: The White Canvas

    Hi there, I'm going to be your reiview this morning. (Obviouslly) What I liked: 1. The point of view. I think because you wrote this from the "canvas's" point of ...

    Jun 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Her

    Okay before I even start my review i have to say holy crap. This is brilliant! Okay now for the reiview. What I liked: 1. The rhyme. I love what ...

    Jun 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: Stars.

    Hi there, aouther2b here and very excited to reiview this piece. Here we go. What I liked: 1. The rhyme. All of that "ight" and "ear" rhyme might seem overwelming ...

    Jun 25, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Death do us part

    Hi there. So I loved this piece which means I am very excited to review it today! Here we go! What I liked: 1. The concept. Brutally honest, sorrowful, and ...

    Jun 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Honour.

    Hi there. What an interesting piece you have written. I like it a bunch so I am excited to review it. What I liked: 1. The rhyming. Though you jump ...

    Jun 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: No Words Left

    Hey there StreetRat. I am your excited reviewer today. So here is the review What I liked: 1. The imagery. You have many solid images as you describe running (walking ...

    Jun 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Politics, Politics Re: something to talk about

    Hi there, I am here to review this piece for you so I hope you find this of some help. What I liked: 1. The message. I give you kudos ...

    Jun 22, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I promise

    Hi there. There really isn't a need to "tear apart" your poem because it is really good. I will however try to give you a solid and concrete review! What ...

    Jun 21, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Write about clocks

    Hi there. I am aouther2b and I will be reviewing both pieces today. What I like about "Climbing Backwards": 1. The flow. It had a very systematic way of flowing ...

    Jun 21, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Why You?

    I do hope you can get the formating fixed as it does take away from the beauty of the poem. I will do the review now lol. What I liked: ...

    Jun 21, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Yours

    This is a really good piece. There is a lot of emotion is such a short poem. Great job. I am estatic to get to review it. What I liked: ...

    Jun 21, 2013
  • Script » Dramatic, Theatre Re: In On A Secret

    Hi there, So I haven't really had much experience in reviewing scripts, but now is a good of a time as any to start. What I liked: 1. The dialog. ...

    Jun 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Loss of a Snide Conscience

    Hi, I am here to review this interesting piece. What I liked: 1. Continuity. I like how you chose a simplistic rhyme scheme that is easy to follow, and that ...

    Jun 17, 2013


The very worst use of time is to do very well what need not be done at all.
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