apeva

I wasn't trying to back talk, and I apologize if I came off badly, I'm just not used to such vague critiques and lack of suggestions. And I wasn't talking ...

You didn't explain to me how I "shoved it" in your faces, so I'd like a clearer understanding. And actually those two things are not what the poem is about, ...

A swaying blade ponders and rears (reflecting a divine heart-shaped face a widow’s peak slicing down forehead and looming over shells of white and blue) to crudely divide a sliver ...

Unfortunately the entire poem would not work with a few of the trimmings; it's surreal style, and that's not debris, they're illusions. It's supposed to create a picture in your ...

Poetry should not just be a clump of words. It should be artistic; it should make you SEE not READ. Show, don't tell. I read poems like this daily and ...

Yeah, well, you know... It's not a true writing site until Jerkface and me have arrived. ;) Oh yeah, because I do SOOOO MUCH writing and critting XD I wasn't ...

Joke? The pictures I found dropped on my lawn of me sleeping say otherwise

Yeah, well, you know... It's not a true writing site until Jerkface and me have arrived. ;)

Animal hide, stretched to seal the void and stained with cockroach inners and maroon hues, is stitched through with threads of rutted branch. Delve, I dare say delve, into the ...

Oh. It's you... I can be mean to you just because I've been on longer, making you newb to the hundredth power. :)

Like it says. Anyways, my name is Ariel and I'm a writer, which makes sense seeing as I'm on a writing site, but in case that thought didn't cross your ...