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Re: Miracle in Iraq
beautiful! I loved it. I did think it was a little sad. But it was pure genius. It really makes you think about how horrible the war really is. So ...
Nov 30, 2008 -
Re: Icy Paths Prologue - A Small Victory
I think it's a wonderful story. You should go back in and critique some things like with the Moon Elves. Keep their name consistant. Be a little more descriptive. What ...
Nov 30, 2008 -
Re: Silvery Whispers - Part One
It was very well written. It was described well and you could picture the scenery in your. I think you do need to go back over it to check your ...
Nov 30, 2008