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Run rabbit run, To the end of the line. Trapped in a corner; No way out in sight. The moons grow older as they watch time die And a mist ...

Run rabbit run, To the end of the line. Trapped in a corner; No way out in sight. The moons grow older as they watch time die And a mist ...

I think this is reeeeeaaaallllyyyy bad. I'm sorry but the language was awful and it seemed very sexist?

I think that it was a good concept but the wording could have been better. It is a poem though, despite what some people believe. Poetry is poetry no matter ...

I liked it. I think it was a little chopy at some parts but you really said what you felt.

This is really beautiful, it's a very elegant description of something so simple.

I think this is really good! I'm not sure if the last line really fits though. The first two lines of your last stanza were my favorite.:)

I look in the glass pool At who lays there We are who we are We are who we are Dreaming of nothing but lies As our heads fill with ...

Wow thats amazing!!!!!

Theres an old man in the mirror And he sees me there He sees me there But he doesn't look His eyes are closed And in his hands he holds ...