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Run rabbit run, To the end of the line. Trapped in a corner; No way out in sight. The moons grow older as they watch time die And a mist ...

I think this is reeeeeaaaallllyyyy bad. I'm sorry but the language was awful and it seemed very sexist?

I think that it was a good concept but the wording could have been better. It is a poem though, despite what some people believe. Poetry is poetry no matter ...

I liked it. I think it was a little chopy at some parts but you really said what you felt.

This is really beautiful, it's a very elegant description of something so simple.

I think this is really good! I'm not sure if the last line really fits though. The first two lines of your last stanza were my favorite.:)

Wow thats amazing!!!!!