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  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Rejection's Revenge | Edited

    Thank you so much for a positive review. :) I'm glad I could present the horrible reality as it is.

    Aug 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: My Hero

    No problem! :D

    Aug 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: The battle of my love

    Yep, that's why I referred to the speaker as "she".

    Aug 21, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Cancer

    You're welcome. :)

    Aug 20, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Cancer

    Then, you could make it clearer. Something like: "Oh, man, I forgot she'd be home soon," Wally said in a hoarse voice, glancing at his wrist watch. "She should be ...

    Aug 20, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Cancer

    That's completely fine. It's your story. You should do whatever you feel would be best. No problem! Glad to help. :)

    Aug 20, 2015
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Technology Re: Blink~ PPT- MusicalTheaterGirl17 vs hermione315

    No problem!

    Aug 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Realistic Re: Before Beauty-chapter #1

    No problem! Sure. :)

    Aug 18, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Darling Dead and Naive See

    No problem! Glad I could help. :)

    Aug 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: deleted

    Oh, no problem! It gave me a chance to review something. :)

    Aug 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Dear Future Husband | Edited

    Thanks for such a positive review!

    Aug 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Dear Future Husband | Edited

    Haha.

    Aug 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Dear Future Husband | Edited

    Thank you!

    Aug 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Dear Future Husband | Edited

    Woah, that's a long list of things I need to improve. Thanks a lot for this detailed review! I hugely appreciate it. You have helped me see where I went ...

    Aug 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Dear Future Husband | Edited

    Thank you! Can I ask, which bits seem out of place?

    Aug 10, 2015


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