ashleylee

A simply inspiring story. It had a message. And I loved it! All of your characters seemed solid. However, I would have liked to see more of this confrontation between ...

First, I found this WAY too short!  Why did you cut it like that?? I would have loved to read more… Well, anyway, some of your sentences were kind ...

Sorry it took me so long to put this on here! :? Well, Hope you all enjoy it! :D ____________________________________________________________________________________ CHAPTER SEVEN The crowd’s anxiet

Wow! I absolutely LOVED this! :D It was soooo CUTE! There was only a couple things that you need to fix: I didn’t know what class she had last period, ...

Okay, I'm not sure if all these corrections I'm going to point out are something that someone else already fixed for you, so just be aware of that! :wink: Well, ...

Thank you to all of you!!!! All of your reviews were awesome! :wink: Night Mistress , I can't wait to read your first chapter. Send it to me!!! Abocreature , ...

Here's chapter four! :D Happy Reading! **Edited as of Sept. 19** _______________________________________ CHAPTER FOUR I return to the coven a few hours later, chilled to the bone but surprisingly coll

JabberHut : Thanks! :D Yeah, I know. I have to make that more visible that Nora is interested in Carmen and vise versa. I'll work on that! :wink: Also, I ...

Night Mistress! I see that you have finally posted your new story! :D I was so excited to read it! But I must say, it was too short for my ...

Sday : Thanks! Take your time! :wink: All right, I'll cut that part out! :D

Periwinkle: Okay, just making sure cause A LOT of people have already commented on the way it sounds like Twilight and I am trying SO hard to make it different. ...

LittleBitCold, Periwinkle, Night Mistress, Abocreature: Wow! You guys make my day! :D Thank you so much for reviewing this! You all are helping me out so much! You know Periwinkle ...

Abocreature : Thanks so much! :D I'm glad you liked it!

Okay, well, I know this doesn't seem like a romance novel yet...but it will be! I promise! :wink: Well, I hope you all enjoy Chapter Three! **Edited as of Sept. ...

lhighton : Thank so much for your lengthy review! :wink: lol I will make the corrections as soon as I can! yeah, I know my stories get cliche at times ...