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Budding Writer: Thanks for the review. I know this is kind of boring but this is only one part of the chapter. I made it shorter so it would be ...

TNCowgirl: Thanks for all the reviews! :wink: I will let you know when I post the rest. (which should be soon! :D)

Yes, you totally need to space this out. I read the first part but it was too confusing for my eyes. *vision blurs from the effort to try to read* ...

Hey, Okay, all my corrections are in bold... "Hannah Erins! Are you gonna answer the question?" went the raspy, old vioce of Mrs. Cooley, [okay, you need to start a ...

Lightflight101: Wow, thank you SO much for the review! I have been struggling with this for SO it's really nice to hear about somebody who really likes it! :D I ...

I started this awhile ago but I have been fixing it up and I think it's time to post it.The title isn't permanent yet. I was debating between "Melody's Lullaby" ...

Okay, to everybody: I am pretty much done with this piece. I might come back to it soon but I have like three stories I'm writing right now (actually four ...

Kelsey: I might just print this out for you. It would be easier for you to read anyway. Hopefully I can do that for you soon! :D

Thanks to all of you for the reviews! I'm sorry I haven't thanked you before but I am copy/pasting all of your critiques and I'm going now to fix them ...

Oh wow...I didn't know you were british! :D That's sweet! So, you say Pyjamas??? Is it still pronounced the same?? That is so cool if it is....I love people who ...

Sylverdawn: Thanks for the review! I did try to make it as though they are in a totally seperate world, as if the earth is totally different then it is ...

KJ: Thanks kels! Yeah, I really struggled with the whole "how to get Dara to like Karson?" thing. And yes, you are a freak with Punctuation! lol jk :D But ...

Very Good :D I don't have time for a proper review but I will go on tonight and fix everything that I saw. There was only a few grammatical things ...

Okay, I just copy/pasted this and wrote all my corrections in bold: The wind pulled my hair across my face covering my eyes and the tears that rolled down my ...

Leahweird: Wow, thanks for the great critique! :D My MC is a girl too. I'll try to clear that up more in the beginning. Yes, that situation between Isadora and ...