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Kels, I'm really falling in love with this story. Keep up the great work :D Kids parted for us as if we were some kind of royalty, and I caught ...

'ello Thornedrose! I'm Ashley and I'll be your reviewer today :wink: At the moment the words came out of my father’s mouth, I felt a hard, sharp pain in my ...

Hiya, Audrey, I'm Ashley and I'll be your critiquer today :wink: I had just flopped into one of the soft leather chairs at the front of the coffee shop, cracked ...

Readers, you'll all be happy because I have lengthened this chapter to more than the last few. I liked writing this chapter because I was able to get more into ...

Ugggggg! My computer just deleted the whole entire review I was finished with to give you and now it's gone. GONE!! Oh well. I can't rant forever. Now, let's finish ...

Hey lucy-lu, my british friend-o-mine! :D I'm sorry I won't be able to get to Chapter 8 tonight like I said I would but I am going to finish this ...

Wow, I'm really shooting these out, aren't I? :P Well, the reason I'm posting this in so close unison because I really wanted to post this chapter. This is when ...

Ooooo, Kels, the scene between Wren and Phil was cute. You have me on the edge of my seat (so to speak :P). You definitely have a talent, as I've ...

Okay, this is one of my shorter chapters. I couldn't really find a good point to stop except where I did, hence the shortness of this. But the next chapter ...

Ah, KJ, my best friend for life, I know where the inspiration came from for this and I apologize for not being more of a comfort. I should have realized ...

Wow, I haven't posted in so long! But I have found inspiration in my writing again. This chapter kind of opens up for the main plot. Hopefully it all makes ...

Hello Lilymoore. I will be your reviewer today so hopefully I am of some help to you :wink: I’ll never forget you And I’ll never forgive you. For love can ...

Hey, Bri! I'm super glad you decided to keep posting on here because I have missed reading your work and missed your company on this site :wink: So, how is ...

I must say, Conrad, you have a way with words. I agree with Incognito about the way you glorified other horrors beside the killing and death of war. I liked ...

Hello and nice to meet you, Nevermore. I don't think I have ever read any of your work before but your title caught my attention right away so without further ...