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scasha : Thanks for reading! :D Your review helped a lot!

Merry_Haven : Ah, thanks, Merry! :D You are too sweet! Yeah, Isaac did guess but I might want to change that because he was just joking around...kind of Twilight-ish. Might ...

Merry_Haven : I'm glad you liked it so much :D Yeah, this was kind of a turning point for the story. I wanted it to be suspenseful, that's why I ...

Merry_Haven : Yes, her mother Divya drowned. And I'm not sure what Lokesh wants to be yet.... Yes, pitaa means father. And I will work on the **** thing you ...

omsvmars22 : Thanks, Mars! Yeah, I really had a hard time with the whole "telling" thing because I wanted it to be really unique so I promise to work on ...

Here's chapter two. It's kind of rough because I struggled with the mother thing, so harsh critiques are welcome. Let me know what you think :wink: Happy Reading :D ________________________________ ...

Hello Everyone! This is the moment you have all been waiting for so I hope it is worth your while to read. I won't ruin it for you but this ...

This one is really short so I apologize ahead of time for the length. Also, this one I kind of struggled with writing so if any of you have some ...

Very very deep, Merry. You get really into your characters head here, really try to let this confused and lost girl show herself to the reader. I loved this chapter! ...

Very deep, Merry. I really enjoy this style of yours. It is so different, so refreshing. Very nice :D My only concern is that sometimes, if you read it out ...

All right, this was a good start. It seems that everything is going perfect, except Danny’s second thoughts. I have a feeling not everything is how it should be however, ...

I can’t get enough of this story. It is so absolutely romantic in like every way possible. How you write, how you create the atmosphere and the characters feelings…one word: ...

Whoa, some intense stuff, Kels. Jeesh, I was not expecting this. But it’s a sort of welcoming change from all the walking, you know? Umm, I found no errors, though ...

Drifters, huh? I wonder what those are… I guess I will have to wait until the next chapter, hmm? :wink: Now, I thought the scene with them was very cute. ...

This was really cute, Deavarna. I loved every minute of it! :D I only noticed one thing: Plus, your probably too young. Should be you’re instead The part where they ...