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Hey kels. I see you have two new pieces out so I decided to start with this one first. And I must say, what a beginning?! This story is surprisingly ...

“He won’t touch you,” the man said in a throaty voice. I noted that he was talking to the girl in the university sweater, and behind her black-rimmed glasses her ...

kELSEY! I'm back! We gotta hang out, girl! Call me! Alright, as for your review goes, it is as follows: Gregory beamed at us as if this was a fair ...

Allrighty, this chapter was good, kels, as all your work is :D I liked how you really expressed her thoughts and how everything was clear in the mind of the ...

But my mind was racing in a million directions, outraged and confused and anguished and denying. I would show more than tell us these thoughts. If you do it this ...

Kels, I'm really falling in love with this story. Keep up the great work :D Kids parted for us as if we were some kind of royalty, and I caught ...

'ello Thornedrose! I'm Ashley and I'll be your reviewer today :wink: At the moment the words came out of my father’s mouth, I felt a hard, sharp pain in my ...

Hiya, Audrey, I'm Ashley and I'll be your critiquer today :wink: I had just flopped into one of the soft leather chairs at the front of the coffee shop, cracked ...

Ugggggg! My computer just deleted the whole entire review I was finished with to give you and now it's gone. GONE!! Oh well. I can't rant forever. Now, let's finish ...

Hey lucy-lu, my british friend-o-mine! :D I'm sorry I won't be able to get to Chapter 8 tonight like I said I would but I am going to finish this ...

Ooooo, Kels, the scene between Wren and Phil was cute. You have me on the edge of my seat (so to speak :P). You definitely have a talent, as I've ...

Ah, KJ, my best friend for life, I know where the inspiration came from for this and I apologize for not being more of a comfort. I should have realized ...

Hello Lilymoore. I will be your reviewer today so hopefully I am of some help to you :wink: I’ll never forget you And I’ll never forgive you. For love can ...

Hey, Bri! I'm super glad you decided to keep posting on here because I have missed reading your work and missed your company on this site :wink: So, how is ...

I must say, Conrad, you have a way with words. I agree with Incognito about the way you glorified other horrors beside the killing and death of war. I liked ...