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Very passionate. This story is touching me. I’m not sure how to explain it but I feel for Sarah like I would for someone real. You are painting her so ...

Wow, your descriptions are unreal. You have such a imagery force going on here. I can picture everything you write, everything you say. It is like I am actually there, ...

So realistic, Merry. This girl’s emotions are so real, so impacting, that I can’t stop reading until the end. And I can’t help but feel bad for her, for her ...

Very very deep, Merry. You get really into your characters head here, really try to let this confused and lost girl show herself to the reader. I loved this chapter! ...

Very deep, Merry. I really enjoy this style of yours. It is so different, so refreshing. Very nice :D My only concern is that sometimes, if you read it out ...

All right, this was a good start. It seems that everything is going perfect, except Danny’s second thoughts. I have a feeling not everything is how it should be however, ...

I can’t get enough of this story. It is so absolutely romantic in like every way possible. How you write, how you create the atmosphere and the characters feelings…one word: ...

Whoa, some intense stuff, Kels. Jeesh, I was not expecting this. But it’s a sort of welcoming change from all the walking, you know? Umm, I found no errors, though ...

Drifters, huh? I wonder what those are… I guess I will have to wait until the next chapter, hmm? :wink: Now, I thought the scene with them was very cute. ...

This was really cute, Deavarna. I loved every minute of it! :D I only noticed one thing: Plus, your probably too young. Should be you’re instead The part where they ...

Things just keep getting better and better for Sophia, don’t they :lol: But I guess, as she said, only time will tell what will happen next…… “Captain, I didn't know ...

Sorry, Merry that it took me so long to get this up. But I was at my aunts and I didn't have any of my reviews that I did (you ...

Hey, Merry. :D I decided that I couldn't resist to read your story since I like Sophia's Suitors so much. Well, here's my review! The window was getting wetter in ...

Okay, I see that most corrections have already pointed out so I'm just going to talk about a few things: Horror Island : This is kind of cliche, unless it ...

Yeah, I totally agree. It is probably on my top list for Must-Read books :wink: I liked it because, like most of you said, it didn't hide the gruesome facts ...