ashleylee

Hello, there. I don't think I have ever seen you around here yet so I guess I should say "Hi!" But back your story... I just copy/pasted and will go ...

Evaeva, everything looks good so far. I'm sorry I don't have time to read the whole entire thing right now but you do have my attention. I read the first ...

Interesting. Your descriptions were mighty fine, I'll give you that :D But I must agree with LovableLittleSock that it didn't have much of a plot or anything. You need to ...

I actually enjoyed this story! I mean, it wasn’t like all those others where you beat around the bush. But I must say, there are some things you will need ...

Hey, Jamie_Rocks!! I read the first few paragraphs and already you have my attention more than the first chapter before you fixed it! So that's a plus in itself. But ...

I liked this! I felt the characters were all very unique and they held my attention. I think all the grammatical and other such errors were covered for me, so ...

Good, very unique idea, Curly! :D I liked it! It was taking me forever, trying to figure out the title and what it had to do with the story...but good ...

Good, Curly, very good! :D Sorry I couldn't get to this earlier...:? But back to your piece of literature... I liked it! But I felt the part when Kate got ...

I like this ending a WHOLE lot better. It was more natural, than forced as before. Nice job! :D I know I am kind of doing another reivew, but I ...

Interesting, Night Mistress! They are sending a mate for her to take…hmm, all the possibilities that this story could hold! lol :wink: But anyway, back to your story… “That doesn’t ...

The first thing I noticed again was the pace. This moved so fast it was hard for me to comprehend what was happening. First, I think you need to describe ...

Good. Your plot is really moving along! :D I did notice a few things: Before she padded into the bathroom, Nicole shut off the alarm and stretched. In the bathroom, ...

Wow…that is so sad… But you did well. You kept me reading till the very end, and now I can’t wait for the third installment. I must say that the ...

Very good start! :D I can understand why you like these characters so much. They are so life-like, so real that you feel as though they are there. Also, you ...

Good! :D But very frustrating, at least for me. I absolutely loathed how Julia talked to people. I wanted to scream at her myself. She was being so rude, especially ...