ashleylee

Hey, I'm copy/pasting again! It was a peaceful, silent, autumn day. The leaves were abandoning their homes and gently gliding to the ground. [

Hello! I don't think I have seen you around here before...So, welcome to YWS! Hope you like the site! :D I must say that this story is SUPER SUPER long. ...

Okay, oviously I'm not going to copy/paste this story! :wink: lol But, right off, I want to point out to you that you need to space this out more. The ...

I'm sorry. I know it bugs some people when I copy/paste their work but it is just SO much easier to correct when I just can write something and then ...

Oh my! This was really sad. But I liked it so that's a plus! :wink: I can't really give you a proper review right now since I'm short on time. ...

Short, yes. A lot to critique on, no. But Interesting and different, YES! It is a little too short to really mention anything about it. I seemed like a random ...

Melkor: I have read the first few lines of your story and I really REALLY like it. You drew me in right away... I, regretably, don't have time for a ...

Hello, All my corrections are in bold... Heart churning, running free down his favorite prairie path [comma] James Anes was feeling two mighty different feelings. The perfect blue sky above ...

Wow...wonderful job! :D You wrote beautifully and in a different style then I have ever encountered before. You told a story but in a unique way...I like it! I can't ...

Okay, this is a little too short for me to really post a long review. Above me ^^^, the others seem to have touched on everything that you need to ...

Hey! :D Here are the things I saw: “So there I was, sitting on the floor trying to hid the huge cottage cheese stain on the carpet.” Kate put her ...

Yes, you totally need to space this out. I read the first part but it was too confusing for my eyes. *vision blurs from the effort to try to read* ...

Hey, Okay, all my corrections are in bold... "Hannah Erins! Are you gonna answer the question?" went the raspy, old vioce of Mrs. Cooley, [okay, you need to start a ...

Very Good :D I don't have time for a proper review but I will go on tonight and fix everything that I saw. There was only a few grammatical things ...

Okay, I just copy/pasted this and wrote all my corrections in bold: The wind pulled my hair across my face covering my eyes and the tears that rolled down my ...