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thanks, makes more sense

um... yeah thanks....I guess....

Thank you so much! You voiced so many of my concerns! Do you have an idea for a name?

Just FWI this is a third installment in a book! Hope you read those to! Thanks for the review

Wow! Um..Ok. That was not what I expected from your title. I don't really understand what you mean by the annual genocide. Do you mean to say that the leaves ...

This is an amazing poem! Oh! Hi there Aspiring here for a review. Just a question, why do you put a comma after every stanza. I would also write this ...

Happy to be of help!

Thanks so much...Yeah, I published it before I was done ( oops) SO it is a woork in progress

Thanks so much

Cool!

Much more macho! I kind of wanted him to seem like a jerk. I was thinking about changing Jenna's name

sorry just trying to be helpful

Its so good

Thanks so much! I will makes these changes

Its so fun to read