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True Heir, Chapter 1
'The Chosen One' is a story I'm currently writing, this is the first chapter in the story. I hope you like itAnyway, thanks for all comments and critiques!*********************************************
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True Heir, Chapter 2
I just wanted to say thank you to the people who gave me the constructive criticism I need. I hope I do better this time, I tried not to ramble ...
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True Heir, Chapter 2(Revised)
Hello! As I've already noted, this is a revised version of The Chosen One, Chapter 2 but is otherwise no different from the original. The symbol that I wrote about ...
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True Heir, Chapter 3(Second Draft)
Okay, so, thanks to the people who commented on my first draft I really appreciated it! This is my second draft and, personally, I think it's must better than the ...
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True Heir, Chapter 4
Okay, this was a particularly hard chapter, and long, to write. It's going to need a lot of work, I think. I'm thinking that the conversations are going to seem ...
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True Heir, Chapter 5
Okay I've had to submit this three times now because each time it doesn't work right. I've had to edit this chapter a billion times now as well and I ...