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Thank you for the wonderful review. I'm glad you liked my poem. :) :) ~atiqa

That would be an unsuccessful attempt at an emoji. :D

You know what... I'm going with the original. :D

In a dilemma... anyways. Thanks%u263A

Thanks. The poem does switch a lot. First it shows an observer. Then, we find our that we ARE the observer and the last part is giving advice to others ...

Thanks for the review. I removed one "own." :D

I've made the changes as you suggested. Let's see what reviews I'll get. Thanks for the help. %u263A

Needs a few tweaks here and there: -ships, -line18 could be rearranged to improve the flow. Otherwise, great poem highlighting the many mood swings and quirks of six year olds. ...