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Thanks for the review lilymoore!! You seem to pick up all the stuff that I don't even if it's a sentence I've read over ten times and think its correct. ...

I have one quick thing to say first before thanking and talking about your review. Sorry if I cause any offence here - OMG YOU ARE A GUY. AND YOU ...

Thanks Esther!! Really appreciate your reviews!! It is a James Bond novel, or at least it started out that way. But like you said, it equals fanfiction, so technically I ...

Thanks for the review - I'm glad you liked it!! To be honest, I never liked the middle section. It doesn't fit, as you said, so I totally agree. This ...

Thank you! You both helped a lot. KD, thank you for warning me about plot drag. I am a little aware of it, but I wasn't sure if I was ...

Firstly, thank you for the review!! It is greatly appreciated. I agree with you about that hook. Reading it over, I feel that there is something missing, but I'm not ...

This is really good... It's pretty short though. And you had Ally grab the sandwhich twice. Thanks for pointing that out...I'd never noticed it before!!

Hey, you do know there's a fan-fic section right? Right. Which is why it is the fanfiction novels section, because it is a novella I wrote. Thank you for all ...

Thanks very much!! Too be truthful, I just wrote it there and then on the spot, so there would be a few bothers, but that's why I have YWS to ...

Thanks for the review people!! Sela, yours was really helpful. I did think I got a bit too repititive in some parts, but I couldn't think of the words to ...