averyismediocre

Honestly, I wrote the title after the poem and just kind of picked a word haha. Thank you so much for the review!

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Thank you for the critiques! This is definitely a first draft poem structure wise so I appreciate the feedback. I'll make sure to restructure my lines. Thank you again for ...

What a lovely response poem, thank you!

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Omg you%u2019re right lol it was a typo I didn%u2019t notice until just now. The original draft in my journal doesn%u2019t have that lmao. Thank you for pointing that out! ...

Hi! Thank you for the review! I used "do" in the context of what the boy would currently be doing if I had met him, which is why I ended ...

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Thank you so much! Honestly, the sleep line I made a little open ended so it can be interpreted in any way you feel. I think that%u2019s a good interpretation ...

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I think this is one of the most interesting perspectives I%u2019ve ever gotten on one my poems. Like a good interesting. I like the way you viewed this. You were ...

"Stars mustn't worry about the darkness of space" is my new favorite sentence.