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Hai!!! It's time for me to take the review! You had a great idea there. I love it. Awesome. But I caught mistakes. For example... If i see you laughing ...

I wrote this with a friend, we were aiming for it to be perfectly, well, confusing. Well, see you around YWS!

Being mixed up and changing topics were what I was aiming for. And this is not a serious story, a friend and I wrote it.

Oops! I forgot to put very on the first quote! My mistake!

Good, but a line could be added after this, "You say the world forgets" Otherwise, good poem. A good idea I use in writing class is adding sentences when I'm ...

Good, but a line could be added after this, "You say the world forgets" Otherwise, good poem. :)

random sorry it was a typo :)

I know the lyrics by heart because it always comes on the radio. And you're right about that line, it's kinda rand!

Thank you!

I really have no idea what in the world i was writing myself, LOL

Thats probably the same way I feel about sweaters. Great. Write on!

I like it! So funny!

So good! Luv it!